I'm under 70, play and write, and here is my latest....posted here just to say you are not right in how you see this place




Thank You Eve
© 2024 John Voorpostel

Thank you Eve, for eating that apple
Thank you Lord for bringing us sin
Thank you Lord for conscious awareness
Thank you Lord for letting us sing

Thank you Lord for giving us serpents
Serpents are needed for setting the rules
Our minds and memories aware imaginations
Say thank you Lord for Eve as your tool

Thank you Eve we will always remember
The Bible told us men misunderstood
Thought you were some simple rib grown companion
Could never become the awesome Eve of our song

Thank you Eve, for eating that apple
Thank you Lord for bringing us sin
Thank you Lord for conscious awareness
Thank you Lord for letting us sing

Lord we are yours there’s devils in details
To you we surrender our souls for all time
Thank you Lord for our conscious awareness
To you we surrender our souls and our rhymes

Thank you Eve we will always remember
The Bible told us men misunderstood
Thought you were some simple rib grown companion
Could never become the awesome Eve of our song

Lord we are yours there’s devils in details
To you we surrender our souls for all time
Thank you Lord for our conscious awareness
To you we surrender our souls and our rhymes

If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop