Just so you don't respond back before backing up your lyric
Let me show you what I mean and I'm wondering if everybody who critiqued It lied to you about it being good
Obviously you want to go commercial with It so there's no excuse

Little things remind me how we are now apart
No more talking on the phone
Or late nights with you alone
And tho I dont know why you said goodbye

- - Verse 1 - you're telling us and not showing
- - lines 1 2 3 4 5 and if you had a 6th are old and used

CHORUS:
EVENTUALLY
I'LL FORGET ABOUT YOU
EVENTUALLY
I'LL LOVE SOMEONE NEW
THO ALL I DO IS THINK ABOUT
THE WAY WE USED TO BE
I'LL GET ON WITH LIFE
EVENTUALLY

Chorus - - can the chorus get any more bland the hook is fine
- - But it lacks everything a hook should be

verse2
I'm waiting for your memory to fade
I'm still holding onto the promises you made
You said you felt for me
A love that would always be
And I wish I could feel that love tonight

- - Verse 2 - you're telling us and not showing
- - Lines 1 2 3 4 5 blah blah blah spare me
- - By the way lines 3 and 4.. who talks like that oh Shakesphere!


REPEAT CHORUS

- - See first chorus

BRIDGE
Somewhere between these walls of time
Someone will love this heart of mine
Though it hurts to know it wont be you

- - All you're saying In the bridge is the same non sense
- - That you said In the chorus (oops)


REPEAT CHORUS

- - Please don't repeat chorus

Last edited by airun; 09/20/07 12:16 AM.