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Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) Beth G. Williams #541624 09/16/07 01:14 PM
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Kaley Willow Top 10 Poster Joined: Apr 2001 Posts: 10,240 PA	Mornin Beth... I thought you did a good rewrite too... I'm wondering about the last line here... is there a pronoun problem or not..... who is the HE.... does that refer back to the HIS or the drunken buddy..... and I guess I'm the oddone out...I'm not getting the connection here.... Did the husband..just sit there and allow it.....? is that the idea...(sorry i really can be dense).... because I'm not getting the connection other wise....why that was the defining moment... Let me read it again....I'm probably just being dense..... Hugs.... Kaley Soon enough her fantasy Was challenged by the reality Of his basking in the shadows of his moments in the sun But too proud to admit it For seven years she hid it Til his drunk buddy groped her, and HE laughed �we�re just havin� fun.� NEW Web Site Start http://kaleywillow.com/ Miss Willow's Fence Row http://cdbaby.com/cd/kwwg2 Andy & Friends http://cdbaby.com/cd/kwwg Piano & more http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=8404&content=music Kids.. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=6469&content=music

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"BMOC" -- Last Rewrite...in 1st post, beneath original version	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 06:22 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Calvin	09/10/07 11:20 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 03:25 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/10/07 03:51 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Sofa King Bixby	09/10/07 04:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 03:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:23 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 04:29 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Joice Marie	09/10/07 04:35 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:39 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	09/10/07 05:15 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:45 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 09:58 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/10/07 11:46 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John W. Selleck	09/10/07 11:59 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 12:53 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 01:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:38 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:43 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:48 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Bobbie Gallup (D)	09/11/07 05:44 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 06:28 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/11/07 12:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 03:30 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 04:41 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:51 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/11/07 06:19 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:52 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/14/07 05:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 03:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/15/07 11:35 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PeterJ	09/15/07 11:59 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:47 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:44 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) DELETED	Derek Hines	09/15/07 12:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/15/07 04:55 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/15/07 05:17 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Lynn Orloff	09/15/07 05:53 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/16/07 03:12 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/16/07 03:50 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/16/07 05:14 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 10:18 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John Voorpostel	09/16/07 10:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 11:33 PM

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