Hi Beth,

I like it. I do like the hope on her wedding day. As for resolve, you can have it, or not. Most people I know, are hopeful on their weddind day. If she decides to leave, you can make her thankful not to have any kids, or not... Or you can leave it almost as is, and I'll still be happy with it. Good luck with this one.

Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandID=1468958 For Selleck/Kay co-writes