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Hey there Wy,

Thanks for your feedback, O Coffeemeister (not sure if that's a word, but it sounds fun to me.)

I did take into consideration a lot of the feedback that had been given to me the first time around....and I think the crux of my problem had been since I had defined her as someone who was caught up in how things appeared, what would she do when her life turned out differently than she had expected? I think it was Bobbie who gave me the idea of her being too proud to admit she had made a mistake and so it took more than just a little while to let go of the fantasy. But I did think it was important to for her to leave.

Guess I'll be going back to the drawing board for a little bit...but I feel like I've got some great ideas for the final tweak!!

Ciao for now,
Mrs. Folger