Whoops, I guess I need to POST that I made some new edits...I know, I'm making you work on this one...you'll need to scroll back up to find my edits in red.

I did nail the hubby, and made sure she left. Though I had trouble bringing much of the first chorus into the second chorus to wrap up the story. I also threw in a last-minute acronym...which I thought might be interesting in that she first thought he was the B.M.O.C. and now she realizes he's just an S.O.B. Don't know if cutting that last BMOC "allows" me to leave the title as is, since I only use the acronym once now I think.....

Don't knock yourselves out on this one, as I'm pretty much ready to put it to bed...looks like there are a lot of good new songs to spend your time on. But by all means, chime in if you'd like....




"Fill what's empty, empty what's full, and scratch where it itches."