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Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) Wyman Lloyd (D) #540200 09/10/07 12:16 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 7,386 Massachusetts Beth G. Williams OP Top 30 Poster
OP Beth G. Williams Top 30 Poster Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 7,386 Massachusetts	You'll have to forgive me this morning, Wy...I've had to resort to TEA.. Anyhow, it appears you and Janice both have found the cracks in the structure -- whhich I'm glad about, actually, because I wasn't sure how to resolve them... About the DREAD vs. HOPE bouquet. I think this is the critical yet still TBD Turning Point Word of the piece. Ultimately, it will foreshadow the resolution -- does she suck it up and stay ("she shouldn've known better") or does she have the cajones to leave? If I go the "hope" route, I very much like your version....then I'll just have to tweak a bit more in the bridge. Regarding "lotion", it was a bit of a forced rhyme, but it was also a way to demonstrate that he could do things for her on his own initiative. Still lots to do....thanks Wy! Beth-o http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=949237 http://www.myspace.com/goldencatfish "Fill what's empty, empty what's full, and scratch where it itches."

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"BMOC" -- Last Rewrite...in 1st post, beneath original version	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 06:22 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Calvin	09/10/07 11:20 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 03:25 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/10/07 03:51 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Sofa King Bixby	09/10/07 04:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 03:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:23 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 04:29 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Joice Marie	09/10/07 04:35 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:39 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	09/10/07 05:15 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:45 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 09:58 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/10/07 11:46 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John W. Selleck	09/10/07 11:59 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 12:53 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 01:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:38 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:43 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:48 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Bobbie Gallup (D)	09/11/07 05:44 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 06:28 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/11/07 12:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 03:30 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 04:41 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:51 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/11/07 06:19 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:52 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/14/07 05:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 03:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/15/07 11:35 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PeterJ	09/15/07 11:59 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:47 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:44 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) DELETED	Derek Hines	09/15/07 12:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/15/07 04:55 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/15/07 05:17 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Lynn Orloff	09/15/07 05:53 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/16/07 03:12 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/16/07 03:50 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/16/07 05:14 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 10:18 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John Voorpostel	09/16/07 10:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 11:33 PM

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