Hey Bethsledge,
I think that's much better. Seems tco me it resolves in the last C. She's decided to leave him. I guess you could make the fifth line--last C read---now she had left him ,but I don't see a lot of advantage in that. The chorus's transition all right for me.
Seven years isn't an unusual time for a woman to stay with a bad marriage. Many stay longer. That always amazes me in this day and age. There used to be a real stigma attached to a divorced woman but no more