Hi Beth

Ok I had replied to this one earlier and stated I didn't see enough change cause she was still with him. I think I musta drank to strong of oatmeal :o. I see now she did leave him in that last chorus. Ok whew now I feel tons better great rewrite only thing I'd change is to have her burning his jacket as she leaves but that's just me.

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