Hi JM,

Thanks again for stopping by and for your positive feedback on your first pass-thru. I'm still struggling with how I want to proceed...before passing out for a few hours just now, I printed it out and tried to see how I might change it...I think I'm falling back into the question I faced with my miscarriage piece...do I need to "fix" it (resolution-wise, I mean)...

I do like the idea of a title, as it is a bit seductive ("she should've known better about WHAT?), but that might mean a re-write...oh well, I'm at least happy with where it's going so far, and grateful for all the input.




"Fill what's empty, empty what's full, and scratch where it itches."