I'm taking John's suggestion and going back to re-post the latest version WAY BACK at the beginning. I will put it right below the original version, so for those who want to follow the re-write along, they can make the comparisons.

BTW, think I'll probably keep my version of that line, since I like the idea of him actually MAKING the statement...indicating total disrespect for her. Thank you though, for your taking the time to come up with and make your suggestion. smile


Last edited by Beth G. Williams; 09/16/07 06:43 PM.



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