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Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) Beth G. Williams #540512 09/11/07 01:19 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 66 PogoDog Serious Contributor
PogoDog Serious Contributor Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 66	Hiya Beth, I'm gonna jump right to it. I like the idea of a Dead End girl. A lot! Unfortunately your first verse doesn't want to cooperate. Especially when you consider how brave a woman must be (sorry ajk) to make the first move in a relationship. Juiced or not - she went for it. Now add the confidence to say,"Do you believe in love at first sight?", and it's safe to assume that this woman is a hard one to break. But she does... and only 4 lines into the chorus. So yeah, I think this girl's gotta fix her problem before she crosses that bridge into the final chorus. Or she'll be forever known as,"oh her!". Which I find so unfortunate... 'cause I really hoped she wouldn't have to turn herself around. Still likable either way, Randy -Dog Your Missing Sock

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"BMOC" -- Last Rewrite...in 1st post, beneath original version	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 06:22 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Calvin	09/10/07 11:20 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 03:25 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/10/07 03:51 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Sofa King Bixby	09/10/07 04:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 03:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 04:23 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 04:29 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Joice Marie	09/10/07 04:35 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:39 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	09/10/07 05:15 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/10/07 09:45 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Janice Hopkins	09/10/07 09:58 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/10/07 11:46 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John W. Selleck	09/10/07 11:59 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 12:53 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 01:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:38 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:43 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 04:48 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Bobbie Gallup (D)	09/11/07 05:44 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 06:28 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/11/07 12:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/11/07 03:30 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Richard G Blum (D)	09/11/07 04:41 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:51 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/11/07 06:19 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/12/07 01:52 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/14/07 05:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 03:57 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/15/07 11:35 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PeterJ	09/15/07 11:59 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:47 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:44 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!) DELETED	Derek Hines	09/15/07 12:34 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/15/07 04:55 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 06:56 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Derek Hines	09/15/07 05:17 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Lynn Orloff	09/15/07 05:53 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:16 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/15/07 07:02 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	PogoDog	09/16/07 03:12 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Wyman Lloyd (D)	09/16/07 03:50 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:55 AM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Kaley Willow	09/16/07 05:14 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 05:32 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 10:18 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	John Voorpostel	09/16/07 10:27 PM
Re: "BMOC" -- (you're RIGHT, it DOES spell COMB backwards!)	Beth G. Williams	09/16/07 11:33 PM

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