Roy like that change in chorus...will do right away.
recently changed those two lines in first verse...because I think you said not fitting right age group...

THANKS SO MUCH, first a reading this lyric over, and secondly for suggestions.

I really worked hard on that verse 2; I really need to study, but with your input and Terry's I'm getting things.

Keep Posted please, need your feedback

Petra
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