Verse 2

You wrote:
I don't mind that old flannel nightgown
Or that night cream you put on your face
I don't care IF you're a night owl
I EVEN GOT USE TO THAT... (Or how you put me in my place-- something like that)

I don't mind how you rack up the credit
BUYING dresses to party in . . . . .(THIS WORKS WELL WITH "MISSING"
But I can't ignore this feel-ing
Some-thing is missing.

Your rhyme scheme is:
ABAC DEFE (Line two needs to rhyme with line 4) (lines 1 and 3 shouldn't)

SHOULD BE
RHYME SCHEME: ABCB DEFE
Like verse 1

Nightowl and nightgown is a clever idea!

Do you know how the rhyme scheme is figured out?
Line one is A
If line two rhymes with line A then it gets an A as well
If line 3 doesn't rhyme with line 1 or 2, then it gets a new letter that hasn't been used yet, like B
If the next line rhymes with the B line it gets a B too, but if not, it gets a C

etc., etc.

Cheers,
Terry

Last edited by Terry G; 03/22/11 03:37 PM.