G'Mornin' Mz P and Bro Terry!

Yeah, it's been fun watching this Baby Take Shape!

From a Marketing POV, I'd shy away from "OLD" Descriptors, like the now deep-sixed "gray hair". There ARE 25-33 yr olds in the SAME predicament as you're dealing-with, &...heh..THEY buy a lot more downloads.

Steve Miller (Band) sorty "Owns" Abracadabra...with onea the Simplest Choruses EVER:

Abracadabra
I wanna reach out & grab ya...
Abracadabra..
Abracadabra.

LIKE Your New Title..it works. I'd (personally) not go into Her Drinking Habits as SPECIFICALLY as ya have there..try to keep her More Universal. (MIGHT wanna have him not entirely care how she always heads off to bed early & she's Always Asleep when he gets there?..) Dunno...but yeah, needs Something Universal plugged-in.

Good Luck with a Good'n' P&T!

Best Wishes & Big Hugs,
Stan