Okay Terry;

Rhyme last word of each line
Matching the last word of the next line?

Terry; lick we change no doubt.

See I need to learn about this rhyming and meter before I can change a thing here.

Sounds like you like this song...do you want to work on it and get credit or shall we wait till I learn more about the areas of rhyming and meter?
Petra


Invasion of Aliens!!!