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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Mar 2011
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Well...this is confusing when one has no education in the matter or rhyme scheme.
No..I still trying...just got Roy's comments now...looking them over and sounds good.
Will study here. thanks for the rewrite of one and use it as guide for two.
This part how many lines...new to me...was just winging my writing...so this is all to me. Now rhyme scheme...haven't had time to study..and importance of each standing on it's own; still grasping that..
Have to sit back rethink and soak up what you have given me.
Much Appreciated for time and effort
Will work on it...
Petra
Invasion of Aliens!!!
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