Terry hope okay to use Roy's suggestions? What do you think?

Roy, hope okay to use;
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CHANGES TO VERSE ONE; TERRY PLEASE READ OVER. I guessed at how to do this rhyme scheme.

ALADDIN SONG


Verse1: female singer here

Honey I don't care how you're losing
Your hair and how you hide the fact
Under that Chicago Cubs baseball cap
I don't even care about the dishes
In the sink or towels on the floor
Or how you didn't fix the door
I don't mind the note on the fridge
"With The Boys" Gone Fishing
But I can't ignore this feeling
Something is missing.

Chorus:1

ALADDIN SONG . . .
Bring back the magic
Weave ME a spell FOR two
Bring back the ROMANCE
It's way overdue . . .
Bring back the long walks
And talks till dawn
Grant us THIS ONE WISH
MY ALADDIN SONG

Verse 2: male singer

Darling I don't mind how you wear
That plaid nightgown to bed
And I don't mind how you feed the pets
First come morning
I don't mind what makes you tick
Or playing pool at Kicks
But I can't ignore this feeling'
Something is missing.

Chorus2:

ALADDIN SONG . . .
Bring back the magic
Weave ME a spell FOR two
Get us back on the love track
We're way overdue . . .
Bring back the long walks
And talks till dawn
Grant us THIS ONE WISH
MY ALADDIN SONG





Last edited by Petra; 03/20/11 11:51 PM.
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