Petra I am really liking this now and you did great on that 2nd verse.

I will look for any last nits lol.. its in my nature. Maybe couple of suggs.

As usual KOS

God Bless Roy and Helen

Line one has two rhymes in the same line ‘care’ and ‘hair’. Just my preference to not have that… don’t want to conflict with the other great end of line rhymes.

For me line two needs to be a tad shorter and cap applies to everyone.. just a thought…

Could also be ‘Hat’ that rhymes… under your ‘hat’

Re-looking at the chorus and this is only my opinion, the lamp is suddenly there.. little bit strange..

I think it needs to established as an ‘IF I HAD A MAGIC LAMP’ etc
So.. it will be just thoughts KOS use loose or abuse

Verse1
Honey I don't MIND if you're losing your hair
Or HOW YOU HIDE IT UNDER YOUR cap
I don't care about the dishes IN THE SINK
I'VE EVEN GOT USE TO THAT. . .
I don't mind the note on the fridge
"ME AND The Boys Gone Fishing"
But I can't ignore this fee-ling
Some-thing is missing.

Chorus
If I had a Magic Lamp
I’d Weave a spell FOR two
Get us back on the track
Cos that’s way overdue . . .
I’d wish back those long walks
And talking right till dawn
Romantic meals with candle light
Having picnics on the lawn
If I had a Magic Lamp

Verse 2:
I don't mind that old flannel nightgown
Or that night cream you put on your face
I don't care you're a night owl
I EVEN GOT USE TO THAT...
I don't mind how you rack up the credit
To buy dresses to party in
But I can't ignore this feel-ing
Some-thing is missing.

Chorus
If I had a Magic Lamp
I’d Weave a spell FOR two
Get us back on the track
Cos that’s way overdue . . .
I’d wish back those long walks
And talking right till dawn
Romantic meals with candle light
Having picnics on the lawn
If I had a Magic Lamp

tag:
Magic Lamp...Oh Magic Lamp
Grant us this one wish
Let's seal it with a kiss

'You Have To Kiss A Lot Of Frogs To Find A Prince'