Thought I would come back for a read Petra.

I like the changes but feel some lines are a tad too long and wordy. IMO

You have changed the rhyme order on the verses as well... ummmm

I thought that you almost had it before then its gone backwards IMO.

You cant please everyone.. me included lol.

Petra, you have to be carefull about taking every suggestion too literally. Some are good, some not, and some will take you back a step or two.

Sometimes you must go with your feelings and thoughts.

just my thoughts...

God Bless Roy and Helen

ps. I will come back later for a deeper look.


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