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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Mar 2011
Posts: 883
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Howdy Roy,
Thank you for your help...I am just understanding now, finally what you and Terry have been trying to get across to me...about how each line must make sense on it's own.
Got it now.
Secondly, the chorus...will check with Terry on this...you have brought insight to this...not everyone might grasp the hook there....I do like your Chorus...will take into consideration here as we want to make it universal appealing and understood by all.
Right will start verse 2 pick up your lines here and see what happens.
Verse one Terry has done a rewrite, but who knows; love it.
Thanks again Roy, a big help here.
Always learning
Petra
Invasion of Aliens!!!
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