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I am not a country writer but have written a few lyrics over the years. Kinda hard just listening to the song without the lyrics written in front of me. However I see one or two probs lyrically. The music and melody seems OK but the words just do not seem to flow. There appears to be a bit of fiddling around to make the syllables fit the melody. I think there are far too many repeated Sweet kentucky rose lines which seem to be used just to pad out the song. Maybe if you post the lyrics or send me a PM I can take a look and give you a more in depth view and a few suggestions.
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