Thanks again everybody for all the great feedback. I have always been of the opinion that the best criticism is the kind that doesn't pull any punches. That is why I like Simon on Idol. He doesn't pull any punches, although he could certainly be a litter nicer about giving it.

Thanks to everyone who offered suggestions. I am presently working on a complete re-write of the second verse and have decided to write a new shortened third verse and will try to make better use of imagery.


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