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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Some minor nits on your new second verse -
Use of the word farm in both the second and third lines doesn't work.
County Fairs are held in the early fall, not the early spring.
In general all the lines seem too wordy for me - too many syllables to sing smoothly.
Definitely getting better though.
Marty my home Experience is that marvelous thing that enables you to recognize a mistake when you make it again!
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