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HER TOWN
by Kay-lynn Carew - 01/12/26 10:26 PM
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https://suno.com/song/3e618c3e-e6c9-4e9a-a520-8b89d572d437?sh=Nv6iqFobcDFh6mWBDave GillBridge There's no escaping The pain of the moment But love can erase it you'll see Verse 3 His world had crumbled and the whole house could hear He could never rebuild what had been turned to rubble But when a new girl showed and helped pick up the pieces He suddenly knew right then it can all begin again, when Bill DraperBridge The years rolled on My dear husband gone My little girl grown and married Verse 3 The atmospheric river hit the whole house could hear I knew my nights were numbered the end of life was near I snuggled down in my comfortable bed with memories of past years I put my hand upon my heart and was thankful for Another heartbeat Saved me from the dark.... That was interesting and enjoyable. I didn't look at Dave's until I finished my own. Similarities and difference! Bill
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wow. thanks guys...............I seriously think (thought) someone was gonna have to die in the end... (bad habit)
so we started with a puppy, then a baby.......... so I'm thinking it's a long stretch to husband and wife (?)
I guess that's where I'm stuck..
I think we all agree what I mean by "another heartbeat"..... even it it's just a cat, or a baby hearing your heartbeat... there has to be another story that's a little more general? Perhaps husband and wife is too.............."easy"?
There has to be a twist I'm missing..........thinking thinking..........
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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