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HER TOWN
by Kay-lynn Carew - 01/12/26 10:26 PM
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Joined: Oct 2001
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My song, My demo, I welcome constructive feedback. Thanks guys! https://soundclick.com/song/556407
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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Do you mind posting your lyrics?
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[Verse 1]
I'm Holding out and I'm holding on
I'm holding back the urge to be gone from this place I don't belong
I'm hanging and I'm hanging on
I'm hanging tough but it won't be long
Before I'm gonna have to move on
[Chorus]
And find some higher ground
Get up off my knees and look around
Climb that mountain don't look down
Till I find higher ground
Verse
I'm talking fast and I'm talking loose
What the hell have I got to lose
What am I supposed to do
I can catch a bus I can catch a plane
Leave no number change my name
Get right out and find my own way
[Chorus]
Where there's some higher ground
Get up off my knees and look around
Climb that mountain don't look down
Till I find higher ground
[Bridge]
They can try to hold me down
But I've got other plans
I don't know my way around
But I'm gonna land
[Chorus]
Somewhere on higher ground
Get up off my knees and look around
Climb that mountain don't look down
Till I find higher ground
[Outro]
Gonna find higher ground
Get up off my knees and look around
Climb that mountain don't look down
Till I find higher ground
Gonna find higher ground
Higher ground
Higher ground
Higher ground
Higher ground
Higher ground
Higher ground
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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I like this Kay-lynn.....Really like how you change the first line in your chorus. This works good.
Did you have any luck with it?
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Well this song per se, not yet, but it wasn't pitched as much as Pray For Rain, but all that changes this year!!.. I got nothing to lose, right?
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops. [/quote]
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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I can do this all day.. pushing the post down over and over til you stop
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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