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HER TOWN
by Kay-lynn Carew - 01/12/26 10:26 PM
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Seriously, I don't remember if I posted this before or not, but it's very dear to my heart I'm just wondering if you think an artist would cut it, or is it more of a sync opportunity? Thanks for listening! https://soundclick.com/song/251213
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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Seriously, I don't remember if I posted this before or not, but it's very dear to my heart I'm just wondering if you think an artist would cut it, or is it more of a sync opportunity? Thanks for listening! https://soundclick.com/song/251213Please post the lyrics, so we're not judging the ai rec4
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Kay-Lynn,
I'm not in any professional position to be able to answer if this is "cut-able" or "sync-able". All I can say is I think this is a wonderful song.
Well done.
Peace,
Dave
"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"
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The best part of me
If I ever had to choose
Between life and lovin you
I know where my heart standS
And if I ever had
Everything to lose
I'd put it all right in your hands
Chorus_
Cus everything you've given me
And all that you are
Is more than I could ever hope to be
Look into my eyes,you can see
Read my mind
You're the best part of me
If you ever have a doubt
We can talk it out
I want you to know I'm here
I can take the tears
You can cry out loud
You've got nothing to fear
Chorus
Bridge:
You can hold the love inside
But baby I can see you're trying
There's something you wanna say
Don't let me get in your way
I'm on your side
If you think you're gonna fall
When you're your back's against the wall
Hold on to me, I'm strong
Nothing you would ever say
Could make my heart turn away
I'll be with you, thru it all
Chorus
tag & out
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Kay-Lynn,
I'm not in any professional position to be able to answer if this is "cut-able" or "sync-able". All I can say is I think this is a wonderful song.
Well done.
Peace,
Dave Much appreciated, certainly gonna put this on my sync list
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Please post the lyrics, so we're not judging the ai rec4 Lol... You actually think that matters here? Actual musician/songwriters have been right all along... AI cheapens the craft. Nobody even questions Elvis' lyrics anymore... I don't believe ANYTHING associated with AI.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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Please post the lyrics, so we're not judging the ai rec4 Lol... You actually think that matters here? Actual musician/songwriters have been right all along... AI cheapens the craft. Nobody even questions Elvis' lyrics anymore... I don't believe ANYTHING associated with AI. It The best part of me
If I ever had to choose
Between life and lovin you
I know where my heart standS
And if I ever had
Everything to lose
I'd put it all right in your hands
Chorus_
Cus everything you've given me
And all that you are
Is more than I could ever hope to be
Look into my eyes,you can see
Read my mind
You're the best part of me
If you ever have a doubt
We can talk it out
I want you to know I'm here
I can take the tears
You can cry out loud
You've got nothing to fear
Chorus
Bridge:
You can hold the love inside
But baby I can see you're trying
There's something you wanna say
Don't let me get in your way
I'm on your side
If you think you're gonna fall
When you're your back's against the wall
Hold on to me, I'm strong
Nothing you would ever say
Could make my heart turn away
I'll be with you, thru it all
Chorus
tag & out Its ok, not alot of furniture. Hook is not very distinct. Is this a i,? the singer sounds pitchy.. Asking seriously. No, this is not cutable. Not exciting enough, but even if it was the greatest song I ever heard, probably still not cutable. Nothing is
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Please post the lyrics, so we're not judging the ai rec4 Lol... You actually think that matters here? Actual musician/songwriters have been right all along... AI cheapens the craft. Nobody even questions Elvis' lyrics anymore... I don't believe ANYTHING associated with AI. Matters to me. I am a songwriter, right now only doing 50b50 share with ai. But there is a huge difference in quality of somg when the lyrics are equally good. Especially songs like this, sll based on the vocal, lyrics matter alot.
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Well... If Elvis can waste his money and take a SUNO production to a studio...
Who's to say what's what anymore?
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Well... If Elvis can waste his money and take a SUNO production to a studio...
Who's to say what's what anymore? Elvis is still wondering if he likes Ai. Soon he will outburst against it. Cause he realizes it levels the playing field, by the sound. How yiu stand out is by having a great song, won't matter how its done.
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Excuse me gentleman.............I uploaded that song in 2003 and yes it's me singing and yes it was done in a studio. It's clearly marked on soundclick for pete's sake.
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Excuse me gentleman.............I uploaded that song in 2003 and yes it's me singing and yes it was done in a studio. It's clearly marked on soundclick for pete's sake. Oh... My bad. Lol, I didn't even bother to listen.
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Excuse me gentleman.............I uploaded that song in 2003 and yes it's me singing and yes it was done in a studio. It's clearly marked on soundclick for pete's sake. Im sorry, I assumed. Vocal is kinda pitchy surprised they didn't touch it up with auto tune. So my question was valid. But your only asking for praise. This is not very good. Not bad, but not very good. That's all honesty
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When I ask for feedback........... it's not about re-writing the song. It's about, did it touch you, did you understand who the characters in the song were, were you bored, did it seem too wordy, did you like the music or was it too slow?
That's the feedback you get when you go to songwriter events.
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Excuse me gentleman.............I uploaded that song in 2003 and yes it's me singing and yes it was done in a studio. It's clearly marked on soundclick for pete's sake. Im sorry, I assumed. Vocal is kinda pitchy surprised they didn't touch it up with auto tune. So my question was valid. But your only asking for praise. This is not very good. Not bad, but not very good. That's all honesty As far as pitch goes, that's what happens when you have a $5.00 radio shack microphone attached to your computer. so... ya'll need to decide, do you want a perfect AI voice or do you want MY voice????...seems like nobody is even commenting on songs anymore.
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The sentiment is nice, and its a nice track
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