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You Should Open a Winery


Well, you whine so much
you should open a winery
work out a deal with
your local refinery
theyll pay you by the load
dump your ole shoe shinery
yeah you whine so much
you should open a winery

youd probablky drink all the profits
run it into the ground
bore the staff to death
with that pestilent sound
but it seems like a match
you were born for the role
what part could you play
but the total A hole

Well, you whine so much
you should open a winery
work out a deal with
your local refinery
theyll pay you by the load
dump your ole shoe shinery
yeah you whine so much
you should open a winery

Work in progress

Like Jesus miracle?
Turn whining into a viable product.

Likeable hook/title

Good one.
Bill

Its over Dom.
You're a hopeless and oblivious fool.
I was fine to banter with random idiocy to put up a song now and then.

But when your kindred spirit put this wretched thing up clearly aimed at KayLynn...as yet uncontested and presumably allowed...I can't be part of anything that will allow. that.

Yeah, that's why you suck as a writer, no ability to see what yiu really are. And who this is about

Goto muses muse, doesn't look like anyone cares

FD be honest. We do care.

Marty why do you just think this song is about you?

We bagger each other til Jesus drops by....BUT it gets the creativity going. that is what is enjoyable.

Bill

He's so self absorbed he thinks the world revolves around.

Bill knows it's about him

Bill,

I was going to private message you but this is quicker and easier. I don't think that Dom wrote this about me. I know that he did. He did it the other day during another flame War. Changed winery to whinery. The dumb song is not the issue.
Dom is just a petty and hopeless jackoff


I also know who Tony JAPOV was addressing as "cu*t."

I quit when Tony posted the racist comment and was coaxed into coming back. In my opinion this latest one is equally as repulsive. And it was leveled at someone who was actually trying to Short Circuit the stupidity that occurs on this website.

If you are comfortable frequenting a website where this level of insult is allowed to occur, that is your decision to make. Mine is to be done.

I'll see you elsewhere and look forward to your songs.

Marty

ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops.

Marty, this song is not about Kay-lynn, and there are no references to any individual in it at all. I genuinely don’t understand the level of noise and drama you’re creating around it.
More importantly, please compare this song to the one you posted that explicitly included my name. Your song contained graphic language, personal insults, and direct attacks. None of that exists here.
The difference seems obvious: when you posted your song, you considered it acceptable because you were in control of it. Now that someone else is mocking behavior that resembles your own, you’re declaring it unacceptable. That inconsistency is hard to miss.

I hope I didn't offend bill writing this about him..

But see Mary's not happy just going he had to stay and rally the troops.

Thanks FD
Spread the word.
Bill

Cool post Rob.
Bill(heading for the like button)

PS...see how its done FD. take notes.

Marty. We know this already. Let it float into the ether and return as a bad ass song that gets you royalty checks! LOL
Bill

I not offended. First rule of lyric writing: have a thick skin, and be ready to write about anything.
Bill

Bill,

When I heard cu*t... I was done here.

Brian, John S.... I would prefer that you eliminate my account from your website. If you don't, that's fine, I'll just fade it out.

Oh Christ

Marty run out of here while you still have a shred of
Dignity

ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops.

Yes Tony has a touch of Turrets. prayers.

But you know, I do wonder how one can quit a site. Its a good thing to check out before signing on, probably.
You would want to gather up all the history you want saved first. Then find the admin area that allows you to delete your account. Maybe JPF doesn't have. Brian can be asked to include this if the site is to be revamped. You could wait around for that Marty, for a cleaner exit from the site.

Bill In complete honesty. Yeah Tony says some out there stuff, I can be in yiur face and argumentative, but the truth is its only Marty, that makes it an issue.

Most people do not care, he just cant help himself, if he's not heading a revolution, he's not happy.

He would not stop using my name, even when he begged me not to do it to him, which I obliged.

Everybody has their own reason for being, his is to try and remove people he domt like.

He'll do the same thing there, he knows no other way.

He's at the center of all drama here.

ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops.

Yup

This is a do g, a good one, stop bumping it down