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HER TOWN
by Kay-lynn Carew - 01/12/26 10:26 PM
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Joined: Oct 2001
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This is MY song, My lyric, My melody and very close to my voice frankly. One has pauses in the verses, the other one is the way I wrote it. Which one do you like better? https://suno.com/s/0JhqjDwYGQp2I9dhhttps://suno.com/s/DmMczWE7d2kKA0Voso what say you all??? Pauses or no pauses????
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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I'd go with the pauses.
Good Luck
Tex
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I like the first…no pauses.
Bill
Last edited by Bill Draper; 12/24/25 03:26 AM.
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Definitely the version without pauses. It has way more drive. It flows much better.
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ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
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I can do this all day.. pushing the post down over and over til you stop
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