Hi Mike and Kristi,


I hope you don't mind.....but I just had to come back for a second listen. You two are just so wonderful together....Kristi writes such beautiful lyrics.....they are always so descriptive, and due to her fabulous imagery, the listener is transported right to that time and place.

I always marvel at Mike's many musical talents! Gosh...just listen to that voice....and Mike you are always so meticulous! Your mixing and production skills and ear for just the right placement of sound effects is always spot on.

I know you expressed a concern about the length of this piece...but you know...if this piece was say, used in a movie, they might want it this length. It would ultimately just depend on its application. In my opinion, if you did opt to make a shorter version, I would probably take out a chorus.

Once again....a great collaboration by two very gifted people.


My very best to you both,
Gail