Hi Lynn,

Thank you for your nice comments!

Kristi echoes my thoughts about safely/crazy...

I was thinking that since the chorus runs for sixteen bars, and occurs three times in the song, that it would be seen as a candidate for cutting...losing one would make the song an acceptable 3:45 or so, and would not affect the song as much structurally, although then where would the bridge go?

It makes me very happy you enjoyed this; thanks for the nice compliments on my singing. smile

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 09/05/09 08:17 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)