Hi Mike and Kristi

Well first up -- in answer to your question
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if the interest is sustained throughout, since it does run over 5 minutes.

YES - it does keep interest - there are enough twist and turns adds and lulls to do that - no doubt... And like Calvin it all feels smooth , polished and a great artistic and musical journey. Can't say enough - how I love your singing - but I've probably lost my credibility because i can't seem to come up with new adjectives......

anyway -- on the down side...... maybe because the lyric is spread out over the course of the five min --it lost a bit of the glue for me -- I mean the story does not hold together as well this way...... but maybe it becomes more of a subliminal story line ..... that gets delivered in a more abstract sense ---- as a listener - I would have to listen again to figure out what I missed --but I would Want to listen again - in any event. It's a musical Journey and it goes to sweet places in a very soothing way. Good entertainment.

Oh and No Mix Issues -- Ha Ha

Thanks for sharing with us. : ) jm


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