Larry ~ Thanks so much for your kind words….elegant….I like that!

Tom F ~ Thank you for your very thoughtful and kind review. Hearing how the lyric comes across, spots that may be out of place and spots that are working is helpful.…gives me a nice awareness of the work….appreciate that. I put this lyric up for critique on the Lyric 3 forum awhile back and received great help from JPFers, including Mike, who offered their perspectives and cool ideas……and it all helped to zero in on my intention and try to bring it out accordingly…so I truly appreciate all the talent that is right here around us, just waiting to offer their creative wisdom. Thanks again for taking the time to listen and let us know your thoughts.

Bob ~ I remember listening to Gino Vannelli! Thanks for your nice comments…glad you enjoyed it!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist