I thought the mix, your vocal, the music sounded great. Kristi is really good at writing these wonderful, romantic lyrics. I was telling Tom Franz the other day that I don't think I could write a love song, so kudos to Kristi for writing something fresh and believable.

I'm with the campers who think it does run a bit long, but I also think Scott is correct about film/TV only using a slab, so it's hard to judge really. I think the chorus itself is too long, but there's nothing to cut there. Maybe just eliminating one chorus as Mike already suggested? Also, you could have two versions once you figure it out. An album version and a version you intend to pitch. But I suppose you had already concluded that. It sounds great, as is, though.

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