Hi Mike/ Kirsty,

I guess I should stick from giving feedback when I rush through it like this, sorry about that. I didn't put enough emphasis on how much I liked the song in the end.

I do feel, though, that if you can pose the question yourself asking if it sustains enough interest, you know deep down that it doesn't.

The suggestion I made was based on the premise of a rewrite, but I didn't got that across either.

I hope you had a good laugh cry