Hi Beth,

Thank you for dropping by and sharing your thoughts with us on our new song.

You are right, there is no way to shorten the song without losing an important element. The bridge needs to lead into the chorus. Without 3 choruses, the bridge leads to the middle of the lake, and there it ends. Just for fun, I had my software speed the thing up to 114 BPM, from the 88 that it was, and it just sounds like I'm in a hurry to have my fantasy, and get the hell outta there!

I hope you had a nice weekend as well; hope all is well with you.

Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)