Hi Beth! All in all, I'd say you have a winner here. The only thing that stuck out like a boulder in the middle of the Sahara desert was the word 'spoon' like Stan had indicated in an earlier post. I'd definitely give that word its last rites although it may be okay to use if your perpetrators are indulging in acts ice creamish. I'll look over your lyrics more tomorrow morning when my mind isn't quite so mushy and it feels like its been wrestling all day with an octopus in my desk's smallest drawer. I was up at the ungodly hour of 4 AM today. Guess that wouldn't be so bad were it not for the fact that I finally got to asleep around 3:30. It was all a sleep lie. lol Take care & God Bless!
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