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Ali Angel
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/27/26 11:00 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Joined: Jul 2006
Posts: 5,776 Likes: 24
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Hi Beth, I like this a lot; I wanted the chorus to hook me stronger, but this can work without that. I thought "pain" needed a modifier, and "spoon" was old fashioned, but not impossible. "First" afternoon...if you are trying to say that her and her lover cheated several times, but the first was the best,--that's what that one word seems to say, there. Ah, I love words!!! The feeling I come away with is of her in a couple of muddled relationships...The Husband gets to be "he", the singer sings to her ex lover...yet she "settles", so you know, maybe this is "smokey jazz", lol  Mike
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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