Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better? Gary De Asi #726505 06/04/09 01:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 7,386 Massachusetts Beth G. Williams OP Top 30 Poster
OP Beth G. Williams Top 30 Poster Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 7,386 Massachusetts	Originally Posted by Gary De Asi Beth, This is a nice song. Its smooth, flows nicely, great alliteration. I like the way you use the weather in contrast with moods and emotions. Good metaphor. Overall, enjoyable to read! Gary De Asi P.S. I'm a Yankee fan. Hi Gary, I'm going out of order here, because I wanted to thank you right off for stopping by with your very encouraging comments. The song has morphed a bit, but I'm pretty happy with where it is right now. What a shame then, that you had to ruin the moment -- A YANKEE'S FAN?! Isn't there some sort of SCREENING PROCESS here at JPF?? Woe is me.... Kidding aside, I do thank you for your generous words. Now I'm going to go find one of your lyrics and work on doing the same... See ya, Beth http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=949237 http://www.myspace.com/goldencatfish "Fill what's empty, empty what's full, and scratch where it itches."

Entire Thread
Subject	Posted By	Posted
"A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/01/09 03:49 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Colin Ward	06/01/09 04:18 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/01/09 04:50 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Calvin	06/01/09 12:23 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Colin Ward	06/01/09 02:27 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/02/09 01:19 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Wyman Lloyd (D)	06/02/09 02:56 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/02/09 06:47 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Colin Ward	06/02/09 08:22 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/02/09 10:23 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Vicki Shields	06/03/09 04:48 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Stephen Kerry	06/03/09 05:56 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Ricki E. Bellos	06/03/09 06:09 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/04/09 07:28 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/04/09 07:19 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/04/09 03:41 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/04/09 12:10 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/04/09 12:36 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/05/09 02:05 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/03/09 06:58 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	06/03/09 12:03 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/03/09 08:06 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/05/09 01:01 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/01/09 05:56 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	06/01/09 06:57 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/02/09 04:37 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/02/09 05:01 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" -- need help with title, at the least!	Beth G. Williams	06/03/09 06:50 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Gary De Asi	06/04/09 04:46 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/04/09 05:12 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Randy P. Gendron	06/04/09 01:59 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/05/09 02:28 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	06/04/09 06:05 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/04/09 07:18 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/05/09 07:51 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Randy P. Gendron	06/06/09 12:49 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Kolstad	06/06/09 02:33 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/07/09 03:50 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Rick Maines	06/07/09 04:15 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/07/09 11:43 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/07/09 04:13 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/05/09 03:21 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Randy P. Gendron	06/05/09 04:40 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/06/09 09:35 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Randy P. Gendron	06/07/09 01:24 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Kristi McKeever	06/05/09 03:54 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/06/09 09:24 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Michael Zaneski	06/07/09 12:37 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Douglas Murphy	06/07/09 01:14 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/07/09 07:34 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	in2piano	06/07/09 07:56 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/09/09 03:56 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/09/09 05:50 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Joe Wrabek (D)	06/07/09 09:07 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/11/09 01:01 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Drifter (D)	06/11/09 02:03 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/11/09 06:27 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Drifter (D)	06/12/09 03:12 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Letha Allen	06/11/09 02:23 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Letha Allen	06/11/09 03:10 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/11/09 06:42 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Patti Smith	06/11/09 06:59 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/11/09 05:37 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/07/09 06:35 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Terry G	06/09/09 08:35 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	Beth G. Williams	06/11/09 06:14 AM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	yann	06/11/09 02:53 PM
Re: "A Change In the Weather" --Changed back to Gal POV --better?	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	06/11/09 03:45 PM

Moderated by Brian Austin Whitney, E Swartz, Gary E. Andrews, John Lawrence Schick, Kevin Emmrich

Hop To

Link Copied to Clipboard

Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.

Newest Members

LukeMeyers, KimBilbrew, AdamSadowski, NicoleRoss, RichardCarr
21,478 Registered Users

Forum Statistics

Forums118

Topics128,718

Posts1,184,589

Members21,479

Most Online180,548
9 hours ago

Just Plain Quotes

"Do not endeavor to be the smartest kid in a dumb class. Instead, you are better off being the dumbest kid in the smartest class, where you will be challenged and you will learn. If you aren't growing, you are dying." -Brian Austin Whitney

Today's Birthdays

There are no members with birthdays on this day.