Hi Kristi,

Looks like you're up!

So let me thank you here and now, for your words here and your encouragement behind the scenes. Yes, I've worked on this one a lot, but I've had some great insightful and accurate feedback, so I think I'm getting close to where I want it to be.

I also like reading your specific comments because you always write them with such care. I've found on more than one occasion you complimenting me on something I hadn't realize I'd done -- but heck, I'll take any sort of kudo you want to send me way!

Yes, the idea that this is sort of "insider" information was intentional...but right at this moment I wonder if the narrator is providing a bit of hope partially for that "missing audience". Does that make sense? Like she's trying to convince "herself" that everything is going to be alright...

I'll have to think on that. In the meantime, thank you again for your visit and generous comments. It's nice when I feel someone "gets" it, ya know?

Anyhoo, catch ya later....
Beth


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