Here are the chick lines:

My sleeve is a tissue

Eyes dry, a bit red
I slide in til she and I spoon

Take baby steps

Otherwise the original works for a male POV. No need for those rappin' redneck lyrics!

Last edited by Colin Ward; 06/01/09 10:29 AM.

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