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Hi there Dave,

I am SOOOO hearing you on the sleeping problems. Feels like perpetual jet lag while being on No-Doz but your eyes flutter for a few minutes, and then you're awake again. What do you do during those hours of wakefulness? Read/write/count sheep? I generally do crossword puzzles...but maybe I should be doing something else...like a Fifth of Bourbon!! (YUK! I'd just throw it all up, then be tired and messy )..

Hi Beth! Oh yeah, the perpetual jet lag while on No-Doz says it all for sure. I usually just keep myself busy doing one thing or another just to keep my mind off counting the grains of sand going through the hourglass in slo-mo. I haven't tried crossword puzzles but will now since you mentioned it. TY! I with you on the bourbon. There's no way it would stay in my stomach either!


Now what do you want again? Oh yes, to give me some feedback on the song. Thank you for taking the time to go through it so carefully -- and for having the cajones to tell me outright to get rid of the word SPOON! I'll have you know, I already DID an ice cream song (weird, huh?), so that's not the answer. But anyway, while I appreciate your modern sensibilities....it's a keeper. As I've mentioned on previous posts, MANY of my gal pals/relatives, etc still use that term...and they're not all old geezers like me!! There are just too many things I like about the word to give it up!

So thank you anyway.

Didn't get the free time I thought I would this morning, the grand-kids came up with a mission for me like they so often do. I had to run off to town and then what should have only taken a short time wound up taking the entire morning. As far as the 'spoon' issue goes it looks like you've given me the 'long walk, short pier' option. lol. Ah, if you like what the hey?

As an aside, and perhaps to temper my rejection of your idea , I gotta tell ya, I LOVE reading your posts. I've only seen a couple, but you use some neat imagery in every day conversation, and that's cool. Totally dug the octupus-wrestling-in-the-drawer deal. In fact, there could be a song in it....."I'd like to snore....in your top drawer....in an Octopuses Wrestling Match today." There you go...a little freebie for your time...(LOL)


Thanks for the freebie 'tempering' and for the compliments. I like reading your posts too and for exactly the same reason. You come up with some good stuff, Beth! Cool spin on the Beatle's song "Octopuses Garden' BTW! And getting back to the 'spoon' thingie, it might interest you to know that my great-grandad from Kentucky married a 'Spoonamore'...and then there was a 'Witherspoon' later on. "We interrupt this message for a brief word from our spoonser..."

We should have this up and musicated in the next day or two, so please stay spooned...I mean TUNED !!

I'll do just that! Have a good night not sleeping! JK! Big hugs!
-Dave

Cheers,
Beth