Dave,

At the risk of tainting your thread with the presence of my comment, I'll risk leaving it anyways. wink

I read the lyrics first and felt like you did not bring the "musical drifter" into sharp enough focus for the listener to know what he/she/it is....and identify with he/she/it.
But then I played it and found the recording overall to be very light and enjoyable. The melody conveys the lyrics well.

I always enjoy listening to what you write and produce. Your stuff is always good.

Imho, you and Ben are keeping good music alive on this site.

Marty