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Let It Rain
by John Lawrence Schick - 12/30/25 08:04 PM
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This is about as close to rock as I can get  https://soundclick.com/song/11925413Like I'm A Rock Star It's Friday night, we've got no place to go So me and the boys are gonna put on a show We'll play a little country, some old time blues It's all just for fun, so we've got nothing to lose I'll do the picking, while Danny strums along No one will care if we get the chords wrong There's no place on earth that I'd rather be Cuz, it turns me on the way that you look at me Babe I'm happiest when you're watching me As I play guitar and sing a little off key Our music careers may not take us too far But I love the way you look at me, like I'm a rock star Yeah baby, like I'm a rock star Next Friday night if we got nothing else to do Me and the boys will play a song, I wrote for you A sweet love ballad, about the most gorgeous gal Who sets my heart on fire and makes me howl It's got a little soul and some rock and roll too It's all about the way I really love you There's no place on earth that I'd rather be Cuz, it turns me on the way that you look at me Babe, I'm happiest when you're watching me As I play guitar and sing a little off key Our music careers may not take us too far But I love the way you look at me, like I'm a rock star Yeah baby, like I'm a rock star We may only play for tips We may never have any big hits I'll always be glad to play for free Just as long as you're watching me (Instrumental) Yeah, I love how it feels when you're watching me As I play guitar and sing a little off key Our music careers may not take us too far But I love the way you're looking at me, like I'm a rock star Yeah, I love the way you're looking at me, like I'm a rock star Yeah baby, like I'm a rock star
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I love the message of this song because it's so true! LOL
Would you mind if I "edit' your lyrics a bit?
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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just example.. trash if you like. no worries. I'm still learning. https://suno.com/s/0TVMNcUmROUI7oTe
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I love the message of this song because it's so true! LOL
Would you mind if I "edit' your lyrics a bit? Sure go ahead. it's always a work in progress.
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I've thought about playing with this one on Suno but I didn't know if I could make any better.
You've got me thinking it might be worth while.
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Well I just posted a link, did that help at all?
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Yes, I see what you're doing I think.......trimming it down a bit. You didn't use the pre chorus. Any reason Why?
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Nope, no reason. I was just trying to get a feel for the music and timing. Your pre-chorus is fine.
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https://suno.com/s/AWTmqXqLqtW755Vbsounds like there's two pre-choruses the way suno set it up. but hey, just trying to help out. Thanks for letting me.
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I'll have to take the time later to night and make some runs with it.
Thank you, Kay-lynn
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how about this?
Friday night, no place to go
me and the boys are gonna do a show
play a little country, some old time blues
just for fun, we've got nothing to lose
[chorus]
Baby the way you look at me
when I play guitar sing a little off key
you're clapping your hands
like we're in a stadium in the yard
yeah you look at me baby
like I'm a rock star
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maybe it should be "like I'm your rock star"?? I don't know. that last line needs to be really strong. I'll think on it.
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I like it.
I enjoyed reading through the lines.
Marty
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maybe it should be "like I'm your rock star"?? I don't know. that last line needs to be really strong. I'll think on it. No, I think it's got to be (Like I'm a rock star) I think adding the your takes away from it. Like I'm a rock star lets the listener picture whom ever they think of as a rock star, Like I'm your rock star might make them wonder who is her rock star.
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I like it.
I enjoyed reading through the lines.
Marty Thanks Marty, maybe take a listen to it as well. Tex
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Hey Tex no worries...........keep going.
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Well some women will do that , say your a rock star , others will say don't quit your day job
Sounds pretty ole school
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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Well some women will do that , say your a rock star , others will say don't quit your day job
Sounds pretty ole school Just that. I was comment stumbled on that very thought. Does the notion give the song extra gestalt? Enjoyed. Bill
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Well some women will do that , say your a rock star , others will say don't quit your day job
Sounds pretty ole school Just that. I was comment stumbled on that very thought. Does the notion give the song extra gestalt? Enjoyed. Bill What on women ? Yes. I have no idea what that word means , even reading what its suppose to mean... gestalt
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We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
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Gestalt
an organized whole that is perceived as more than the sum of its parts.
Women says: you not really a rock star, but you are my rock star
Billy Joel line: careless cut you, and laugh while your bleeding.
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