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Let It Rain
by John Lawrence Schick - 12/30/25 08:04 PM
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Kay-lynn: Hey I got the mp3 downloaded and am playing around with it . I think I would just like to take your melody and add drums a little lead guitar and bass.
I know you wanted a bridge also, so I'l l play around with that on the second go round. You have a great voice.
Cheers and happy new year....Paul
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That would be great Paul!!!!! thank you so much!
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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by redwriter1:
hey Linda, that's not bad, but did you listen to the melody? I'm not sure all those words will fit. (smile)</font> That's easy enough to change as well. You can always change a tune to fit the words. I don't really listen to the music, being that I'm a lyricist. I have the habit of only hearing a song through it's lyric if that makes any sense. I'm nuts anyway! LOL I just feel that "good" lyrics have their own tempo. In other words the lyric must always flow.
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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by songbird1:
That's easy enough to change as well. You can always change a tune to fit the words. I don't really listen to the music, being that I'm a lyricist. I have the habit of only hearing a song through it's lyric if that makes any sense. I'm nuts anyway! LOL I just feel that "good" lyrics have their own tempo. In other words the lyric must always flow.
</font> Hey, I just tried to listen to the music and the damn thing won't let me. No one will ever!! call me a computer genius. So I don't know now what the song sounds like. Sorry! Linda
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Depending on your connection you can either "stream" it.. or download it by right clicking your mouse and hitting "save target as"..
Hope that helps.
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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by redwriter1:
hey Linda, that's not bad, but did you listen to the melody? I'm not sure all those words will fit. (smile)</font> Here, try this on for size as a bridge.. Sometimes life can work itself out in the strangest way Turn your darkest stormy nights into the brightest day And all those doubts you had now seem a million miles away Cause you found someone, because you found someone...... how's that for corn ball?...but it works!! Linda
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guess I'd have to hear YOU sing it.. (wink)...
Don't worry about corny.. if corny sells, pass the popcorn!!!...with extra butta.
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kay-lynn: I just did a full band production using your demo last nite to see how it would sound with a band behind you.
Of courxe I didn't record any finished product but I think it is good enough to at least put up on the board so stay tuned I should have it uploaded to my sound click site tonight.
Cheers....Paul
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WOW!!!! REALLY???? I'm SO EXCITED!!!..
I guess I have a reason to stay up then!!
It's so generous of you to spend time on it Paul... wow... I can't wait!
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Paul.. I don't see it... is it there yet?
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Kay-lynn: Here it is. Sorry for not getting back to you. I been involved in my other life. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/colaborations2004music.htm [This message has been edited by Paul T Wentworth (edited 01-04-2004).]
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Wow!.. That was sooo kewl!...
I'm trying to download the mp3. .but it won't let me. do you have the option blocked?
ya, know, I almost got up and danced to my own song.. !! hahaha
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Hey...that's pretty good! I'm jealous now because I didn't hear my chorus in there... Waaaaah!
Kay-Lynn... you need a band, girl! Sumpin' fierce!
-gary
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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by redwriter1:
Wow!.. That was sooo kewl!...
I'm trying to download the mp3. .but it won't let me. do you have the option blocked?
ya, know, I almost got up and danced to my own song.. !! hahaha
Kay-lynn: Hi and thanks, it was my pleasure. No I didn't block it. I can send you an mp3 directly.
So happy you liked the piece. I kept the band in the background so's everybody could hear your great voice. I think it rocks if I do say so myself. Its Joyous. I think you should demo it after you get the bridge. I haven't really though of one as yet although there are lots of suggestions up here. Stay tuned. I could record the bridge seperately and we could add it later if you like it.
Now back to my other life!
Cheers....Paul
</font> [This message has been edited by Paul T Wentworth (edited 01-05-2004).]
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thanks for sending the mp3!!
I have a bridge "finally".. haha.. shall I send it off to you or would you have to re do the whole track?
I'll email you about it tomorrow.
You're so very kind to take the time to make a track for me. Just rememeber.. I NEVER forget a kindness. (smile)
Thanks!
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Kay-Lynn:
Send it to me at Olibird@netzero.net. I can do another recording. Since I have the arrangement, I can do it in no time.
I could send you two versions one with and without voice.
I like being kind ...I also like working with talent.
All the best ....Paul
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New link of this song, I think it's a little to fast so I'm gonna try Suno to see if AI can assist? https://soundclick.com/song/6516778
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Hi Kay-Lynn,
I'd love to give it a try with Suno. Just let me know if you want me to.
All the best
Robert
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Give it a shot, I tried and failed, it was a little to fast and I've only started using it today lol
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Wow. Nice one rob…jeez now we are cookin’…..love this song Kay-Lyn!!
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Well I sure love the voice they gave it, right??? haha.. Not bad at all. (not a fan of a bridge, because it's not supposed to have one)....maybe a little more harmony or chorus voices?
A few I tried sounded great with those voices to build up the last two choruses.
I'll post what I tried in a bit. Thanks for jumping in there Rob!!!
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ya know Rob, I did one pass through on this and Suno gave it a background vocal on the last chorus which was so kewl, but I don't know how to ask for it.
It was like when she's singing.. "when love comes in and... (loves comes in) and makes you a winner (loves comes in)<< background voices, it was so cool but I don't know how to get it to do it.
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ya know Rob, I did one pass through on this and Suno gave it a background vocal on the last chorus which was so kewl, but I don't know how to ask for it.
It was like when she's singing.. "when love comes in and... (loves comes in) and makes you a winner (loves comes in)<< background voices, it was so cool but I don't know how to get it to do it. Kay-Lynn, you can achieve that just the way you wrote it. At the end of your lyric line you add the backing vocal text in brackets "( )", not "[ ]". If you want the background vocals sung in harmony, you should add "layered harmonies" or "harmony vocals" to the style section of Suno. That works for me almost every time. When love comes in (love comes in) and it makes you a winner (love comes in)
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Oh thanks!!!! I need to learn how to do more styles like you said. Thank you for helping me.
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"Must be bad luck" is pretty hard to sing.
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https://suno.com/s/DmMczWE7d2kKA0VoSure wish I could PICK a singer like... I don't know.. me?? LOL
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