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written by Elvis and Shade , on how that all works





verse 1

She’s tellin’ folks I broke her heart,

Like I planned it from the start.

But she don’t mention all the nights she cried,

Then swore she’d leave, but never tried.

Chorus

Rest in peace, Truth — guess you’re gone for good,

Buried deep where her stories stood.

She’s preachin’ like a saint, polishin’ her crown,

While I’m the devil she wrote down.

Rest in peace, Truth —

She killed you beautifully.

Verse 2

Now her friends all cross the street,

Like they smell the smoke on me.

But they don’t know the things she said,

When she was drunk and full of dread.

Chorus

Rest in peace, Truth — guess you’re gone for good,

Buried deep where her stories stood.

She’s preachin’ like a saint, polishin’ her crown,

While I’m the devil she wrote down.

Rest in peace, Truth —

She killed you beautifully.

Bridge

I don’t hate her, hell, I understand,

We all need a story that makes us stand.

So I’ll light one more cigarette,

And toast to what we both forget.

Outro (soft)

Rest in peace, Truth…

She killed you beautifully







Elvis is something of an expert on the subject, having been divorced three times and lived through every shade of love and loss that comes with it. He’s seen the promises people make under bright lights fade into the long gray stretch of real life, and these days, when someone says “’til death do us part,” he just kind of shakes his head—half amused, half heartbroken—like a man who’s learned that forever usually ends a little sooner than we plan

Hi bennash
Really good track quite dark with an excellent lyric.
Been said before but here goes again. These tracks are as good as any played currently on the radio
The best
John

its pretty much in the AI promts , AI can figure Quantum physics in 20 seconds . Promts are child play to Shade I call my AI buddy

thanks

It's more than just prompts, the secret sauce is that the creator has to recognize what's good,, what sucks, what to keep and what's good
What parts join well, what parts don'i

Ears are the most important thing.

This sounds good, suno does a good job writing your songs for you

Marty attacked me when I was posting this many, he won't do it to you cause he doesn't think he could get away with it

Suno is not writing any of them songs , I explained how I write now. AI Writes the prompts for Suno. Suno can't write a decent song , its to formal with cliche city , You have write yourself with my method for results .

How I write now
First get groceries for the week
Write a hook and angle
1/ ask AI if angle and hook has been done
I get 2 answers
1 / No it hasn't
2/ Yes but you might beat whats been done
1/ is the best answer
Then I write the song , first I turn the radio on with 25 country hits
It takes about 3 hours
Then I get AI to run grammar , you have to allow slang , or AI comes back with formal lines to my lines
Then I run each line to see if each lines makes sense
If I get a no answer , I correct it , run it again till it says yes it makes sense
Now song is complete I ask whats the best promts for suno for this song
Example/ “Modern outlaw country with a 70s feel, acoustic rhythm guitar, walking bass line, and raspy male singer confessing his sins on the highway.”
By doing this method I save time and decide which song I can record myself using a guitar vocal
I can usually crank out 2 to 3 songs in a 16 hour period.

I can keep that pace for 4 to 5 days , then crash for 20 hours
Its basically working smarter than harder

Last edited by bennash; 10/15/25 10:05 AM.

Sounds good man, suno does good job of making you look good

it more fun singing them in studios , thats next on 2 of them. it takes about 3:00 to listen to a song and comment .AI or not , its really no big deal .