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Kerouac
by Fdemetrio - 10/23/25 07:17 PM
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Lol...
by Bill Draper - 10/23/25 01:34 PM
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It’s All About Dollars & Cents (Neil Cotton) http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12683404The time has come we should move on cause love no longer is in our hearts Living together isn’t what we want But we can’t afford to live apart We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s all dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents I work 5 nights every week, We pass at the door cause you work days When I’m awake you are fast asleep We’re now more different than the same We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents We can share the kitchen and facilities Cause no one’s there when we have the need We moved in ‘cause we believed in our love But these mixed up lives have messed that up We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents.
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I like this, Neil. Just a couple of things I would do differently. I wouldn't use the title in the third line of the chorus. And I don't love the word "facilities". Other than that, it's cool
Bill
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Good intro Neil and a good all round song.
Best of luck with it
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Bill I see what you are going for...I went for repetion but I could achieve that by doubling the hook.
Facilities, utilities. flipped a coin LOL
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Thanks Travis. I am satisfied for now with it.
Nothing in stone.
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I believe Neil passed he was member elsewhere to.
One of the nicest guys.
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Yeah', Neil was the "good humor" man... Always enjoyed his comments.
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