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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Hi Donna,
Very nice lyric...well, sad, but well written. And I think the hook is great and very appropriate for the times we are now in.
One thing that odes jump out right away is the fact that this lonely soul is living in such a huge place. I almost think you were working on "clever" with the opening 2 lines ("third floor-second rate"), without pondering whether it seems feasible that he'd be living there alone.
Touching depiction of a sad man using the worst possible escape mechanism.
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Last edited by Frank N Furter; 04/28/09 06:50 PM.
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