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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jan 2001
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Howdy GJ. Sure appreciate the excellent suggestions. Only one I can't use is this line, because the singer isn't leaving at this point in the song:
I smiled to myself as I left
I also think I want to retain the word "friend" in the last line of that verse to emphasize that to this gal, every stranger was a friend.
DO hope you get a chance to come back on this one. I want to get it to music fairly soon. Thanks for checking in on this for me.
Bobbie
They'll tell you success in the music biz is all about who you know...but the truth is...it's about who knows you. Gallup 'n Dawg Music
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