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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jan 2001
Posts: 387
Serious Contributor
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Serious Contributor
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Hi Bobbie, Here are a couple of ideas for V1 and Climb.
I[badly deleted}needed a break and something to eat Dead tired from drivin' all nite When I saw that old sign I knew the food would be fine By the big rigs parked on the right With a smile as bright as ["the" deleted} morning sunlight Creeping over the canyon rim She brought me a cup and left the whole pot Said "I know what you need, my friend"
What a wonderful way to start a new day I smiled to myself as I left ["Just" deleted}A small town girl had brightened the world Of a stranger she only just met
Just some minor suggestions for the first two sections. Maybe some of them will be useful. I'll try to get back to the rest of the lyric later. I'm kinda on the run today.
Cya, GJ
[This message has been edited by GJShades (edited 08-25-2001).]
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